This is a nice start to an annotated bibliography but 1- you need to include your revised thesis statement in this part of the project 2- your documentations need some minor corrections, so please consult The Little Penguin Handbook. 3- Your assessments and reflections need more work. Remember that the reflections need to be developed, and must include quotes/specific examples from the sources as well as make connections to the other two sources. 4- In the reflection for the first source, you state the source does not support your thesis? Why did you choose to include this source then? Please contact your research adviser from LRC 103 Ning-Yesika E. Alvarez and Lorena Pineda
I read this part of your research paper and I think that you are doing a great job but it seems like the sources you have found are not working for you because you stated that you cannot use them. Try thinking about what you want to prove to the reader. Do you want to show that Hispanic masculinity is positive or negative? then you search for specific articles regarding your topic and that can help you prove what you have stated on your thesis.
Do you have a thesis yet?
Contact me if anything or if you have time we can meet at LAGCC library and search together.
This is a nice start to an annotated bibliography but
ReplyDelete1- you need to include your revised thesis statement in this part of the project
2- your documentations need some minor corrections, so please consult The Little Penguin Handbook.
3- Your assessments and reflections need more work. Remember that the reflections need to be developed, and must include quotes/specific examples from the sources as well as make connections to the other two sources.
4- In the reflection for the first source, you state the source does not support your thesis? Why did you choose to include this source then?
Please contact your research adviser from LRC 103 Ning-Yesika E. Alvarez and Lorena Pineda
Hello Glenda,
ReplyDeleteI read this part of your research paper and I think that you are doing a great job but it seems like the sources you have found are not working for you because you stated that you cannot use them. Try thinking about what you want to prove to the reader. Do you want to show that Hispanic masculinity is positive or negative? then you search for specific articles regarding your topic and that can help you prove what you have stated on your thesis.
Do you have a thesis yet?
Contact me if anything or if you have time we can meet at LAGCC library and search together.